You are Here #FridayFotoFiction

So the husband won AGAIN last week, with his story The Magic Hands. With that am more determined to write better now. ;)lol I kinda enjoy this war talk. Read my story also na. Won’t hurt.Promise ;)Here goes my take on this weeks #FridayFotoFiction – You are here!

You are Here #FridayFotoFiction

You Are Here – Flash Fiction

The blue walls with flowers painted in pink. The corner full of toys and the small little crib that, she used as a child. Tears welled up, as Archana realized her dream of being a mom had come true.

She felt an arm slid across her navel, pulling her into a tight embrace.

“I told you. It will happen!” said the love of her life.

With a twinkle in her eyes and a smile, that tried hard not to spill over, Archana said, “There’s just one problem! Who will the little one call ‘amma’ and who ‘mom’?”

Katrine acted like throwing a fit and hugged Archana again laughing.

“You are here our little one. Our family is now complete”, their thought resonated.

The little one gurgled as if saying yes.

Wordcount [130]

Linking the story You are Here to #FridayFotoFiction up to Tina & Mayuri

You are Here #FridayFotoFiction

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I think am getting better at storytelling, but quite unsure of it. Show some love and comment to let me know. I do want to get better at it. Someday I’ll write a book and not about opinions. LOL 😉

15 thoughts on “You are Here #FridayFotoFiction

  1. Let me be the first one to comment and show some love:) 🙂
    Well if I have to sum it up.. “Now that is how you write a story” I liked it!! Well done☺️

  2. I love the entire write up on the page, from the very first to the last one. About the story- It’s amazing. I wish our society starts accepting such relationships too. every relationship on this planet is pure and true, so why judge, just because it isn’t the same picture we have wanted to see?
    really nice take, Akshata. 🙂 cheers!

  3. Determination makes dreams come true. Happy for them. Loved your bold take on the prompt.
    Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction
    P:S: Yes, you are getting better with each story you share. Keep it up. You have my vote, always :))))

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